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  • CV

    • I create corporate interiors and workplace strategies.
  • I also keep a professional blog on the design of commercial spaces where I publish insights from my own practice.
  • For the past 13 years, I’ve been engaged in a narrow professional field creating working spaces that inspire people.
    • In my practice, I made sure that the basis of the designer’s activities is the creation of a unique user experience, and not an environment.
  • My mission is to create places that unlock people’s potential.
    • I wish they were made more meaningful.
    • And in my practice, I rethink buildings and spaces, focusing on changes in society, changes in people and their behavior, in the social sphere and everything that the world of technology can give us.
    • Over the past year, I have come to the idea that I would like to expand my professional geography and practice outside of Russia.
    • The reason was that the domestic market is not very large and does not allow me to further develop my competencies.
    • For me, this is very important to never stop and to get an educate, keep on developing myself and exchange experience.
  • I have been following your company for a long time, therefore, I decided to write you a personal letter.
    • I’m sure that I can become a valuable asset in your company and acquire even more knowledge and experience.
  • Moreover, I believe that we could be useful to each other within some kind of creative collaboration.
  • All we need to do is to think over such a collaboration.
  • Thank you for considering my letter and my projects.
  • I look forward to hearing from you.
  • It is very important to me, even if you share a friendly advice with me.
  • I will find it very valuable.

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