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    • Anya’s life 2

  • Two weeks ago, I uploaded my writing to this website for the first time.
  • I did not expect much.
    • To my surprise, I received many corrections within 24 hours!
    • It is amazing!I was touched by this kind of sharing spirit.
    • I went to the Chinese block and wanted to find some writings to correct.
    • However, it seems not many people are learning mandarin, the latest writing was uploaded one years ago.
    • Anyway, I like here and I am also very willing to offer help to Chinese learners.
    • Today is a hot day.
    • The weather is stuffy.
    • I clap for myself for still going to practice room to practice piano.
    • To be honest, it is not easy to keep practicing piano everyday, sometimes I can be lazy, and sometimes I felt what I played was awful and did not want to play anymore.
    • However, what makes me carry on are those extremely beautiful moments that I spent with piano.
    • When I play piano I feel the world is quiet and peace, and I am totally understood by piano. It is lovely.
    • In the afternoon I went to the express point to pick up my express.
    • I bought some books and clothes from online shop.It is convenient.
    • Recently I am a little bit of nervous because I applied an scholarship in March and the result of the application will come soon.
    • If success I can be an exchange student to visit Europe.
    • The competition is intense, as it is always intense in China.
    • I keep my finger crossed.

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