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  • Anya’s life

  • Time flies.
    • It shocks me when I realize that there are only 2 months left for this semester.
    • These days I keep asking myself what I have achieved for this semester, the answer is frustrating.
    • So many days is accompanied with depression and anger.
    • However, the most beautiful thing for this semester is that I started learning piano this month.
    • I attend piano class once a week and I practice piano almost everyday.
    • The music calm me down.
  • When I practice piano, I feel I have achieved inner peace.
    • The other decision I made this semester is reducing the time that I use mobile phone each day.
    • I feel the wechat message is always interrupting my work and minds, I hope I can deeply enjoy my life and work without social media interruption.
    • Reducing the usage of mobile phone allows me to focus better on my life.
  • Tonight I am going to have a cup of hot milk and go to bed early.
    • Tomorrow I will have a piano class, I am looking forward to it.

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