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About my day
- Hi, everyone can anybody tell me what are the mistakes i am making in my sentence making👇?
- I thought this was a nice day, i done so much things today but something that always missing.

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- About my day
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- Hi, everyone can anybody tell me what are the mistakes i am making in my sentence making👇?
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- Hi, ~~everyone~~¶
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  Can can anybody ~~tell me what are the mistakes i am making in my sentence making👇~~point out the errors in the following sentences?
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- I thought this was a nice day, i done so much things today but something that always missing.
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- I thought thisat today was a nice day~~, i~~. I've done so m~~uch~~any things ~~today~~ but something ~~that~~was always missing.
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- I thought it~~his~~ was a nice day~~, i done so much things today bu~~ because I'd accomplished so much, yet something was missing. ¶
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  I thought today was a nice day because I'd accomplished so much, yet something ~~that al~~ways missing.
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