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Are you happy?
Hi.
- I’m not really happy but moste of time I try to show I’m happy and everythings are cool but I’m exhausted and I have heard If you think and say negative sentences they come in your life.
- Really I don’t know what to do.

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- Are you happy?
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- Hi.
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- I’m not really happy but moste of time I try to show I’m happy and everythings are cool but I’m exhausted and I have heard If you think and say negative sentences they come in your life.
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- I’'m not really happy ~~but m~~. Moste of the time I try to show I’'m happy and that everything~~s are~~ is cool, but I’'m exhausted and I have heard Iif you think and say negative sentences they come in your life.
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- While I’m not really happy ~~but~~, moste of time I try to ~~show~~act as if I’m happy and that everything's ~~are~~ cool, but to be honest I’m exhausted and I have heard Ithat if you think and say negative ~~sentences~~things, they ~~come~~enter into your life.
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- Really I don’t know what to do.
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- Really, I don’'t know what to do.
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- RI really I don’t know what to do.
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