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- Short Essay To My Important And Best Friends: Friends
- There are so many friends in our life,but I don't know the difinition of it.
- There are so many best friends in our life, but I don't know difinition of it.
- I just know that there are a few friends when I be with them how happy and free I am.
I love you, pink and min.
- Ps: My lovely min, hope you also can come to guangzhou the nxt time, we found a excellent bar, its safe and the feeling is so good!
- I am impantient the next time(october) coming.

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- Short Essay To My Important And Best Friends: Friends
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- There are so many friends in our life,but I don't know the difinition of it.
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- There are so many friends in our life, but I don't know the diefinition of it.
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- There are so many best friends in our life, but I don't know difinition of it.
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- There are so many best friends in our life, but I don't know dithe definition of ithese words either.
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- I just know that there are a few friends when I be with them how happy and free I am.
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- ~~I just~~All I know is that ~~there ar~~I have a few friends wh~~en I be~~om with them ~~how~~I can feel happy and free ~~I am.~~to be who I am at once.
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- I love you, pink and min.
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- Ps: My lovely min, hope you also can come to guangzhou the nxt time, we found a excellent bar, its safe and the feeling is so good!
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- Ps.S: My lovely mMin, I hope you can also ~~can~~ come to gGuangzhou ~~the~~ next time~~, w~~. We found an excellent bar~~, it~~ which is safe and the ~~feeling i~~ambiance's so g~~ood~~reat!
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- I am impantient the next time(october) coming.
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- I ~~am impantient the next time(october) coming.~~can hardly wait until our next meeting in October.
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