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  • Cover letter

    • Dear Madam, Sir, I am currently looking for Financial executive position because both my wife and I are planning to move to Canada.
    • As I saw your offer, I was persuaded I could be the right applicant for this position.
    • First because I worked as a group Industrial controller under a 9-month interim management contract in Saint Gobain head office.
  • The experience was very positive, and I had other opportunities to work with the company subsidiaries but could not continue for personal reasons.
    • Today I have 12 years of international work experience in finance and controlling.
    • I work 6 years in France has financial controller involving the monitoring and the consolidation of international scope, but I also worked 4 years abroad (2 years in UK and 2 years in Canada).
    • I had experience as a manager involving the functional or hierarchical management.
    • The strategic position that I had of over my career enable me to acquire a good financial analysis skill which enable to quickly target the cost variances.
    • As a business partner I achieved different project based on process and cost optimization.
    • Most of my work experience were based on industrial and engineering activities which enable to gain strong knowledge on that type of activities while I was working very closely with the Operations management and Staff.
    • Through personal initiative and with the agreement of my managers, I also carried out projects to optimize or dematerialize processes.
  • I also had the privilege of being in touch with a multitude of trades, personalities and nationalities.
  • My professional mastery of the business language allowed me to work on an international perimeter and thus get to know different management standards I am confident that I can perform the job, and I am excited about the idea of working for your company.
    • I will be glad to schedule an interview to discuss my interest on this job application, I will be available at your convenience.

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  • câu 1
    • Dear Madam, Sir, I am currently looking for Financial executive position because both my wife and I are planning to move to Canada.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Dear Madam, Sir,To Whom It May Concern:¶

      I am currently looking for       Fa financial executive position because both my wife and I are planning to move to Canada.
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    • First because I worked as a group Industrial controller under a 9-month interim management contract in Saint Gobain head office.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • First, because I worked as a group Iindustrial controller underduring a 9-month interim management contract inat the Saint Gobain head office.
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    • The experience was very positive, and I had other opportunities to work with the company subsidiaries but could not continue for personal reasons.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 6
    • I work 6 years in France has financial controller involving the monitoring and the consolidation of international scope, but I also worked 4 years abroad (2 years in UK and 2 years in Canada).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I worked for 6 years in France has a financial controller which involvinged the monitoring and the consolidation of international scope, but I also worked 4 years abroad (2 years in UK and 2 years in Canada).
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    • The strategic position that I had of over my career enable me to acquire a good financial analysis skill which enable to quickly target the cost variances.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The strategicmanagement positions that I had of overve held during my career have enabled me to acquire a good financial analysis skill, which enables me to quickly target the cost variances.
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    • Most of my work experience were based on industrial and engineering activities which enable to gain strong knowledge on that type of activities while I was working very closely with the Operations management and Staff.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Most of my work experience werehas been based on industrial and engineering activities which enabled me to gain strong knowledge on thatose types of activities while I wasalso working very closely with the Ooperations management and Sstaff.
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    • Through personal initiative and with the agreement of my managers, I also carried out projects to optimize or dematerialize processes.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Through personal initiative and with the agreemconsent of my managers, I also carried out projects to optimize or dematerialize processes.
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    • My professional mastery of the business language allowed me to work on an international perimeter and thus get to know different management standards I am confident that I can perform the job, and I am excited about the idea of working for your company.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • I will be glad to schedule an interview to discuss my interest on this job application, I will be available at your convenience.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I will be glalook forward to scheduleing an interview with you to discuss my interest on this job applicasuitability for this position,. I will beam available at your convenience. ¶
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