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  • During the last eleven years I have worked in different companies doing administrative and commercial tasks.
  • Currently, I hold the position of commercial advisor in an important company in the pension industry.
    • My management has been characterized by providing professional advice to current and potential clients, to generate effective sales and meet the sales objectives set by the company.
    • Likewise, prospect clients, identify needs, design service proposals, provide follow-up and post-sale service that guarantees client loyalty.

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    • During the last eleven years I have worked in different companies doing administrative and commercial tasks.
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    • Currently, I hold the position of commercial advisor in an important company in the pension industry.
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    • My management has been characterized by providing professional advice to current and potential clients, to generate effective sales and meet the sales objectives set by the company.
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    • My management has been characterized by providing professional advice to current and potential clients, to generateing effective sales and meeting the sales objectives set by the company.
    • My management has been characterized byactivities include providing professional advice to current and potential clients, to generateing effective sales, and meeting the sales objectives set by the company.
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    • Likewise, prospect clients, identify needs, design service proposals, provide follow-up and post-sale service that guarantees client loyalty.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Likewise,In addition, I prospect clients, identify needs, design service proposals, and provide follow-up and post-sale service that guarantees client loyalty.
    • Likewise,I also help identify prospective clients, identify and satisfy needs, design service proposals, and provide follow-up and post-salepost-sale and follow-up services that guarantees client loyalty.
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