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Text from joice_vane - English

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    • A final exam always has a different expectation, it is the conclusion of a phase, the last step that separates you from the objective and what will come from it.
    • This is the pressure that comes to my mind when I go to take a final exam, the first reaction is to try to put that feeling of pressure forward, this is dangerous because it can lead many people to procrastinate the preparation.
    • The two most important and difficult final exams for me were the driving test and the TCC presentation, in these two episodes I was so nervous I couldn’t stop shaking, the anxiety led to pressure in my heart and difficulty breathing, so much that because of the emotional state I had to take the driving test three times before passing.
    • For the TCC presentation, as much as I prepared myself, at the moment the ideas didn’t flow as expected, but in the end, everything finished well.
    • These two episodes were memorable challenges because in each one I needed to leave my comfort zone and face different limitations, the traffic that is unpredictable which scares me, the opportunity to be able to give up perfectionism to grow up.
    • Learning English wasn’t different, it was necessary to overcome a block that came from a place where I felt more intimidated than safe to make mistakes and learn.
    • What helps me is the certainty that in everything I do my part, that I prepare myself, God comes with his part, helping me and making all this cooperate for my good.

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  • Sentence 1
    • A final exam always has a different expectation, it is the conclusion of a phase, the last step that separates you from the objective and what will come from it.
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    • A final exam always has a different expectation, i. It is the conclusion of a phase, the last step that separates you from the objective and what will come fromout of it.
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  • Sentence 2
    • This is the pressure that comes to my mind when I go to take a final exam, the first reaction is to try to put that feeling of pressure forward, this is dangerous because it can lead many people to procrastinate the preparation.
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    • This is the pressure that comes to my mind when I go to take a final exam, the. A first reaction is to try to putostpone that feeling of pressure forward, t. This is dangerous because it can lead many people to procrastinate theover preparation.
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  • Sentence 3
    • The two most important and difficult final exams for me were the driving test and the TCC presentation, in these two episodes I was so nervous I couldn’t stop shaking, the anxiety led to pressure in my heart and difficulty breathing, so much that because of the emotional state I had to take the driving test three times before passing.
      Vote now!
    • The two most important and difficult final exams for me were the driving test and the TCC presentation, i. In these two episodinstances I was so nervous I couldn’t stop shaking, the. This anxiety led to pressure in my heart and difficulty breathing, so much so that because of themy emotional state I had to take the driving test three times before passing.
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  • Sentence 4
    • For the TCC presentation, as much as I prepared myself, at the moment the ideas didn’t flow as expected, but in the end, everything finished well.
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    • For the TCC presentation, as much as I prepared myself, at the moment twhe momentn I was presenting, the ideas didn’t flow as expected, b in spite of preparing myself. But in the end, everything finished well.
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  • Sentence 5
    • These two episodes were memorable challenges because in each one I needed to leave my comfort zone and face different limitations, the traffic that is unpredictable which scares me, the opportunity to be able to give up perfectionism to grow up.
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    • These two episodes were memorable challenges because in each one I needed to leave my comfort zone and face different limitations,: the traffic that is unpredictable which scares me, the opportunity to be able to give up perfectionism to order to grow up.
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  • Sentence 6
    • Learning English wasn’t different, it was necessary to overcome a block that came from a place where I felt more intimidated than safe to make mistakes and learn.
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    • Learning English wasn’t any different, i. It was necessary to overcome a block that came from a place where I felt more intimidated than safe towhen makeing mistakes and learning.
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  • Sentence 7
    • What helps me is the certainty that in everything I do my part, that I prepare myself, God comes with his part, helping me and making all this cooperate for my good.
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    • What helps me is the certainty that in everything I do my part,. In that I prepare myself, God comes withplays his part, helping me and makcoordinating all this cooperate for my own good.
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