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Text from CathyBochkova - English

  • My adventure in Germany

  • I’m in love with Germany.
    • For the last time, I was in this country 2019.
    • First, I visited my friends who live in the north of Germany.
    • It was very interesting; we visited the Baltic Sea and one port town.
    • Then I had to go to my aunt in the west, in Cologne.
    • My friends bought me a ticket and put me on the train.
    • The journey started out great, the German trains are very comfortable and fast.
    • But an hour later my adventure began.
    • Suddenly the train stopped and a lot of people showed up.
    • There was no place for them and they were sitting on their suitcases.
  • It was like a war movie!
    • Then the train stopped and stood still for a long time, and then went in the opposite direction!
    • Of course, it was announced over the loudspeaker that there had been a problem and apologised for the inconvenience.
  • I was really scared!
    • The trip was supposed to be 4 hours, but we ended up driving for 7 hours!
    • Afterwards I found out what happened.
    • Not far from Bremen, a bomb was found that had been lying there since the war.
    • The railway tracks were blocked off, waiting for the bomb squad.

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