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    • How many do you listen to music along a week?

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    • How many do you listen to English music a long a week ?
    • Well, I’m fond of music and along a day a listen music more, but for improve my English I must listen two English music along a day and expect English music I listen Persian music because when I listen music find nice feelings specially happy music, but I’m really hard to choose music because I really recpect myself and things that I heard.

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    • Well, I’m fond of music and along a day a listen music more, but for improve my English I must listen two English music along a day and expect English music I listen Persian music because when I listen music find nice feelings specially happy music, but I’m really hard to choose music because I really recpect myself and things that I heard.
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    • Well, I’m fond of music and along athe day aI listen to music more, but forto improve my English I mustshould listen two English music along athe day and expect. Apart from English music I listen to Persian music because when I listen music findto it, I have nice feelings , especially happy musicwhen the music is happy, but I’mit's really hard for me to choose music because I really recspect myself and things that I heard.
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    • Well, I’m fond of music and along aduring the day aI listen to music more often, but for improve my English I must listen two English music along aduring the day and expectcept for English music I listen to Persian music because when I listen to music find nice feelings speciallyI feel good, specially when it is happy music,. but I’m find it really hard to choose music because I really recspect myself and the things that I heard.
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