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  • Sports

  • I’ve never been a sportive person.
    • When I was a kid, I use to play soccer.
  • The coach was my father’s friend.
    • He was a such dependable man, training with him would have been a good experience if I had liked soccer.
    • I was an easygoing kid that didn’t care about the responsibility or the discipline, so I just spent my time with my friends in the field so he kicked my out.
    • Then, at 12 years old I tried to play tennis, the coach was an awful woman that made me cry every day for three months, but at least there were some nice guys there.
  • Now, I’m going to s fitness center.
    • It’s a cool place, the trainers are very good at their jobs, but I still hate working out.

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