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- My ferst text :)
Hello.
- My name is Julia, I am from Russia. I am from St. Petersburg.
- My sity is very beautiful.
- There are live many a talanted People: Scientists, doctors, artists, teachers and other profession.
- I work in Saint Petersburg. I am HR.
- I love my work every Day.
- My dream is learn English and help other profession and People.
- I love travelling about world.
- I am very frendly:)

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- Hello.
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- My name is Julia, I am from Russia. I am from St. Petersburg.
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- My name is Julia, ~~I am from Russia.~~ I am from St. Petersburg in Russia.
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- My name is Julia,. I am from ~~Russia. I am from St.~~ St. Petersburg, Russian Federation.¶
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  NOTE: It is also acceptable in certain circles to express your city as "St Peterburg" or simply, as is the Russian custom, "Peterburg". Certain people in The West, those with a knowledge of Russian~Soviet culture and history, understand and appreciate the significance of the term "Petersburg".
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- My sity is very beautiful.
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- There are live many a talanted People: Scientists, doctors, artists, teachers and other profession.
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- There are live many a talaented People: Scientists, doctors, artists, teachers and other profession.¶
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- ~~There are live m~~Many a talaented Ppeople~~: S~~ such as scientists, doctors, artists, teachers and other professions live here.
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- There are ~~live~~ many a talaented Ppeople~~: S~~, including scientists, doctors, artists, teachers and other professionals, who live in St. Petersburg.
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- I work in Saint Petersburg. I am HR.
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- I work in Saint Petersburg. I am in HR.
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- I work in Human Resources (HR) in Saint Petersburg. ~~I am HR.~~
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- I love my work every Day.
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- I love my work every Dday.
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- I love my work ~~every Day~~.
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- My dream is learn English and help other profession and People.
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- My dream is learn English and help other professionals and Ppeople in general.
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- My dream is to learn English and help other people, professionals and ~~Peopl~~otherwise.
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- I love travelling about world.
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- I love travelling abroutnd world.
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- I love travelling abroutnd the world.
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- I love travelling ~~about world~~.
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- I am very frendly:)
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- I am very friendly:)
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- I am very friendly:)
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- I am very friendly. :) ¶
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