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Best friend
Hi.
- For today’s topic I’d like write about best friend an close friend.
What do you think about this?
- In my view best friend is who give you good feelings and love you and when you are upset or don’t have confidence help you until reform yourself.
In my mind best friend is who you can talk with it easily without judge or don’t afraid that it one day hurt you.
How do you think?

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- Best friend
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문장 1
- Hi.
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문장 2
- For today’s topic I’d like write about best friend an close friend.
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- For today’s topic, I’d like to write about a best friend and a close friend.
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문장 3
- What do you think about this?
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문장 4
- In my view best friend is who give you good feelings and love you and when you are upset or don’t have confidence help you until reform yourself.
  투표하세요!
- In my view, a best friend is someone who gives you good feelings ~~and~~, loves you, and when you are upset or don’t have confidence, helps you until you reform yourself.
  Alexweiss 댓글
  
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문장 5
- In my mind best friend is who you can talk with it easily without judge or don’t afraid that it one day hurt you.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
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- How do you think?
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