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  • Best friend

  • Hi.
    • For today’s topic I’d like write about best friend an close friend.
  • What do you think about this?
    • In my view best friend is who give you good feelings and love you and when you are upset or don’t have confidence help you until reform yourself.
  • In my mind best friend is who you can talk with it easily without judge or don’t afraid that it one day hurt you.
  • How do you think?

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English