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    • Place where I live.

    • There is a toy store, grocery stores, a cosmetics store, various playgrounds and recreation areas, schools, kindergartens, many residential buildings,railwaystation, 2 clinics.
  • The weather is cold and snowy.
    • There is a lot of snowherelately.
    • There is almost no rain, the sunhappens.
    • There are manygrocery stores, the museum is nearby, there are severalcafes, and manyparks.
  • There are many people in my city.
  • There is a lot of traffic on the roads.
    • I can go in the evening to the Barracudarestaurant with friends, go to the FairyTale Park and visit.
    • There are manyparks and amusementplaces I like.
    • There I dislike the smell of sewers in the streets.:)

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