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  • Our environment

    • We learn about environment since we go to school.
  • We have read books, magazines, newspapers and even articles in internet about this topic.
    • Why is environment so important to us?
    • Because it is where we live many years and obtain clothes, food, air, water, etc.Besides, it must be cared and protected for the development of current and future species, such as flora, fauna and human being.
    • Nowadays there are many problems due to human being.
  • Many of them are: water contamination, air pollution, soil contamination, exploitation of natural resources and decline in biodiversity.
    • If I had the opportunity , I would explain in my classroom how to care the environment from home.
    • For instance, each person can take measurements from home such as: consciously use water, no littering in the streets, turn off the lights in the house when it is daytime.
    • We also must show kids to love the nature and how to do it.
  • Kids should care pets and plants and not uprooted.
    • Furthermore, to recycle properly, clean the sand of the beach, parks and mountains, do not throw trash in rivers and beaches because it will die many animals due to contamination.
    • Kids should turn off the water tap when they brush their teeth, besides reuse the paper, show them writing in both side of the paper.
    • If I were leader or YouTuber, in the first place, I would talk about the protection of our environment, to start with having more buses would improve public transport in cities and it would avoid air pollution.
    • If it would exist more parks, we had cleaner air to breathe.
  • In the second place, I would tell governments should promote caring for the environment and control the actions of industries, companies and the scientific community.
  • To sum up, with these actions, we are contributing to a more sustainable planet.
  • Protecting nature and caring for the environment is in our hands.

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    • Because it is where we live many years and obtain clothes, food, air, water, etc.Besides, it must be cared and protected for the development of current and future species, such as flora, fauna and human being.
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    • Because it is where we live many years and obtain clothes, food, air, water, etc.Besides, it must bewe waste our planet resourses.Besides, we should cared and protected for the development of current and our environment ,we should save our future species, such as flora, fauna and human being.
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    • Many of them are: water contamination, air pollution, soil contamination, exploitation of natural resources and decline in biodiversity.
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    • For instance, each person can take measurements from home such as: consciously use water, no littering in the streets, turn off the lights in the house when it is daytime.
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    • For instance, each person canshould take measurements from home such as: consciously use water, no littering in the streets, turn off the lights in the house when it is daytime.
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    • Furthermore, to recycle properly, clean the sand of the beach, parks and mountains, do not throw trash in rivers and beaches because it will die many animals due to contamination.
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    • Furthermore,Moreover, you just need to recycle properly, clean the sand of the beach, parks and mountains, do not throw trash in rivers and beaches because it will die dmany animals can die due to contamination.
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    • Kids should turn off the water tap when they brush their teeth, besides reuse the paper, show them writing in both side of the paper.
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    • Kids should turn off the water tap whilen they are brushing their teeth, besides reuse the paper, .show them writing in both side of the paper.
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    • If I were leader or YouTuber, in the first place, I would talk about the protection of our environment, to start with having more buses would improve public transport in cities and it would avoid air pollution.
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    • If I were a leader or YouTuber, in the first placefirstly, I would talk everybody about the protection of our environment, to start with having more buses.secondly,to start would improve public transport in cities and it would avoid air pollution.
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    • In the second place, I would tell governments should promote caring for the environment and control the actions of industries, companies and the scientific community.
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