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Text from YakovSachuk - English

    • My job

    • Hi my name is Yakov ,I work in trucking apartments company .
    • The team is made up from four workers There is one driver he also the boss and three strong fellows ,I am one of them .
    • To my opinion the must important principle to pass an transportation without loss is :carry slow and with confidence.
    • And second principle,Not less important,it’s good communication between coworkers,cause a lot of staff are able to cary only in pair ,and for pass through the route with no damage ,the pair need be in same mindset.
    • So if there is some problems in the relationship maybe it’s a good opportunity to change residents , change place change luck and by the way improve your communication.

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    • The team is made up from four workers There is one driver he also the boss and three strong fellows ,I am one of them .
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    • TheMy team is made up from four workers .
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    • The team is made up from four workers
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      : the driver hewho is also the boss and three strong fellows ,I am one of them , of which I am one.
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    • To my opinion the must important principle to pass an transportation without loss is :carry slow and with confidence.
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    • ToIn my opinion, the muost important principle to pass an transportation without loss is :to carry slow and with confidence.
    • ToIn my opinion, the must important principle to pass an transportation without loss is :carry slow and with confidenceaspect of a moving company is the slow and confident transport of goods without damaging them.
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    • And second principle,Not less important,it’s good communication between coworkers,cause a lot of staff are able to cary only in pair ,and for pass through the route with no damage ,the pair need be in same mindset.
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    • And the second principle,Not les it's important, too, it’s good communication between coworkers, cause a lot of staff are able tos can carry only in pair , and forto pass through the route with no damage , the pair need be in the same mindset.
    • And second principle,Notaspect, no less important,it’s good is that there be excellent communication between coworkers,cause a lot of staff are abl in order to successfully coordinate tohe cary only in pair ,and for pass through the route with no damage ,the pair need be in same mindsetrying of household furnishings and other items.
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    • So if there is some problems in the relationship maybe it’s a good opportunity to change residents , change place change luck and by the way improve your communication.
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    • So if there is someare any problems in the relationship, maybe it’s a good opportunity to change residents , change place change luck and by the way improve your communicationplace, luck and improve your communication. That's all for me now. Thank you.
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