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Yalda’s night🌟
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- Ok I told you in Iranian’s belife it’s one minute longer than any other nights and they celebrate it.
- They buy nuts, fruits of fall, watermelon and pomegranate and all of the members of family come to house of head of family and they sit together and eat and talk and enjoy and so then read the poems ofHafez.

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- I want talk more about Yalda’s night again in this section.
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- Ok I told you in Iranian’s belife it’s one minute longer than any other nights and they celebrate it.
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- They buy nuts, fruits of fall, watermelon and pomegranate and all of the members of family come to house of head of family and they sit together and eat and talk and enjoy and so then read the poems ofHafez.
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- They buy nuts, fruits ofthat are in season during fall, watermelon and pomegranate ~~and a~~. All of the family members ~~of family come to house of head of family~~gather at the head's house and they sit together ~~and eat and~~, eat, talk and enjoy ~~and so then~~. They also read the poems of Hafez.
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