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    • Experiment on Animals

    • A lot of companies worldwide develop medications or even products for our benefit.
    • Most of them use animals to run tests to see if the drug is reliable or has any side effects.
    • This practice is not regarded as a suitable method for most people, especially animal protectors.
  • I find this issue very complex, but I beg to differ between the medical field and the research companies.
    • Firstly, animals were created to keep the balance in our world.
    • And each species have a crucial role in maintaining flora and fauna in perfect unison.
    • Humans have already destroyed a large amount of our planet, and pharmaceutical companies are using defenseless animals to perform scientific experiments on those creatures.
    • Strikes around the globe are taking place to fight against those giant companies that rule the world with their money.
    • Activists such as lawyers, vegans, and animal protectors are fighting every day to put an end to this.
    • Animal exploitation cause pain, develop diseases such as cancer, and many of them die during the process.
  • However, there are other solutions to this problem, for example, running tests in laboratories or even in humans.
    • Nowadays, there are a lot of companies that do not use animals or any animal input to fabric or develop their products.
    • These companies are known for being vegan or animal friendly, but actually, they are doing their part of protecting the species we have left.
  • In conclusion, companies should invest more in other fields to create better solutions to test their products.
  • We must keep our animals safe because they are our future.

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