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    • According to the graphics above we can say that there a general decrease of people without insurance since 2009.
    • North carlolina has highest percentage of people under age of 65 without health insurance but it seriously went down .
    • It decrease by -4.5 % over the past 6 years which one of the biggest drop compare to the other states.
    • Massachuets used to have a low percentrage of people without health insurance (under 6 %) and it still going down almost reaching 3 %.
    • We can see that the most important drop and started on 2013 for all state.

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    • According to the graphics above we can say that there a general decrease of people without insurance since 2009.
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    • According to the graphics above we can say that there has been a general decrease of people without insurance since 2009.
    • According to the graphics illustration above, we can say that there a general decrease of people without insurance number of uninsured people has increased since 2009.
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    • North carlolina has highest percentage of people under age of 65 without health insurance but it seriously went down .
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    • North cCarlolina has highest percentage of people under age of 65 without health insurance but it seriously went down this has substantially gone down (since when - which year?).
    • While the state of North cCarlolina has highest percentage of people under age of 65 without health insurance but it seriously went down , that number has decreased over the last six years.
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    • Massachuets used to have a low percentrage of people without health insurance (under 6 %) and it still going down almost reaching 3 %.
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    • Massachuetts used to have a low percentrage of people, at under 6%, without health insurance (under 6 %) and it still going down. It has continued to fall, almost reaching 3 %.
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