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  • Are you busy?

    • Hi, I hope all of you was be perfect till now .
    • Well if I want repliy it , I should say in modern society all of us are busy and you can’t find visaversa of it easily because all of us have many golas and to arrive them must try hard.

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    • Well if I want repliy it , I should say in modern society all of us are busy and you can’t find visaversa of it easily because all of us have many golas and to arrive them must try hard.
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    • Well if I want to repliy it , to it, I should say in modern society all of us are busy and y. You can't find visaversa of it easileasily find someone not busy because alleach of us have many golas and to arrials. To achieve them we must try hard.
    • Well if I want repliy it , I should say in modern society all of us are busy and you can’t find visaversa of it easily because all of us have many golas and to arrive them must try hard.

      NOTE: I "get" from where you're coming in this statement but to 'correct" it would require an utter re-formulation. You should try re-writing and re-submitting it to this community.
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