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    • My Resume

    • Professional with 19+ years of experience in multinational companies, with knowledge in production processes, quality tools, work safety, operational performance evaluation, production control, SAP, GMP, TPM and 5’S.
    • • At AMBEV I worked as Production Supervisor IV in beer filling lines, where I am responsible for the operational routines and ensuring the fulfillment of production goals, within safety standards, quality, costs and deadlines.
    • I manage a team of 43 employees including analyst, maintenance technicians, operators and interns.
  • I hold daily productivity meetings where I perform maintenance planning, monitor the indicators of efficiency, quality, costs, autonomous maintenance through the SAP system with notes and work orders, thus proposing the necessary plans and actions to achieve goals and objectives.
    • I perform operational performance appraisal and develop skills matrix and staff training, inspect the area weekly in an environmental round to comply with legislation.
    • I participated in the strategic planning of the company, with goal setting, SWOT analysis.
    • I worked on the start-up of a new production line in 2009, where I introduced the concept of people and cell management as autonomous maintenance, operational skill matrix, GMP and the 5’s program through Ambev-VPO management system.

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  • Sentence 1
    • Professional with 19+ years of experience in multinational companies, with knowledge in production processes, quality tools, work safety, operational performance evaluation, production control, SAP, GMP, TPM and 5’S.
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    • Professional with 19+ years of experience in multinational companies, with k. Knowledge inof production processes, quality tools, work safety, operational performance evaluation, production control, SAP, GMP, TPM and 5’Ss.
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  • Sentence 2
    • • At AMBEV I worked as Production Supervisor IV in beer filling lines, where I am responsible for the operational routines and ensuring the fulfillment of production goals, within safety standards, quality, costs and deadlines.
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    • • At AMBEV I workedI worked at AMBEV as Production Supervisor IV in beer filling lines, where I amwas responsible for the operational routines and ensuring the fulfillment of production goals, within safety standards, quality, costs and deadlines.
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  • Sentence 3
    • I manage a team of 43 employees including analyst, maintenance technicians, operators and interns.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • I manage(d) a team of 43 employees including an analyst, maintenance technicians, operators and interns.

      NOTE: Sentence two (2) is set in the PAST TENSE, so should also the balance of the language in this CV/resume/ personal dossier be set in PAST TENSE?
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  • Sentence 4
    • I hold daily productivity meetings where I perform maintenance planning, monitor the indicators of efficiency, quality, costs, autonomous maintenance through the SAP system with notes and work orders, thus proposing the necessary plans and actions to achieve goals and objectives.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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  • Sentence 5
    • I perform operational performance appraisal and develop skills matrix and staff training, inspect the area weekly in an environmental round to comply with legislation.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • I perform(ed) operational performance appraisal ands, develop(ed) a skills matrix and staff training, inspect the area weekly in an environmental round to comply with legislation, trained staff, conducted weekly inspections of the work area to ensure legislative compliance.
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  • Sentence 6
  • Sentence 7
    • I worked on the start-up of a new production line in 2009, where I introduced the concept of people and cell management as autonomous maintenance, operational skill matrix, GMP and the 5’s program through Ambev-VPO management system.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • I worked on the start-up of a new production line in 2009, wherat which time I introduced the concept of people and cell management as autonomous maintenance, an operational skill matrix, GMP and the 5’s program throughvia the Ambev-VPO management system.

      NOTE: Still in PAST TENSE. Okay then.
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