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    • The way we work and study nowadays

    • Education and Work have been the same for centuries, taking classes at an institution for hours, or working in an office and commuting every day.
    • However, with cutting-edge technology, the pattern has been changing.
  • Many companies and institutions are offering remote work and online courses.
    • The institutions are not even making a distinction on your diploma, like bachelor’s and Ph.D., between online or on-campus classes.
    • This kind of delivery course is becoming increasingly popular because it is cheaper and more convenient to take.
    • Universities are not the only ones delivering online classes but high schools as well.
    • Due to the Coronavirus pandemic in 2020, the use of technology to keep up with classes and work became more relevant, and that is a leap forward to the advancement of the way we live today.
    • Working and studying remotely has its advantages like no commute, and it can even reduce the carbon footprint, fewer traffic jams, and of course, save money from transportation, not to mention less stress.
  • In the educational field, in some cases, the schedule is way more flexible, enabling the student to choose when to watch classes.
    • I experienced all the benefits from remote work and study and I can guarantee that my development at both places was higher online than doing it personally.
    • Internet is the future, and extraordinary developments and ideas are being created to shape a better future for all of us.
  • The main purpose is to facilitate access and give possibilities to choose how to manage our precious time.

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    • Education and Work have been the same for centuries, taking classes at an institution for hours, or working in an office and commuting every day.
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    • Education and Wwork have been the same for centuries, whether taking classes at an institution for hours, or working in an office and commuting every day.
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    • The institutions are not even making a distinction on your diploma, like bachelor’s and Ph.D., between online or on-campus classes.
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    • TheAcademic institutions are not even making a distinction on your diploma, like bachelor’s and Ph.D., betweenbetween degrees earned through online or on-campus classesinstruction.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
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    • This kind of delivery course is becoming increasingly popular because it is cheaper and more convenient to take.
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    • This kind of deliveryOnline coursework is becoming increasingly popular because it is cheaper and more convenient to take.
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    • Universities are not the only ones delivering online classes but high schools as well.
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    • Universities are not the only onesIn addition to universities, high schools are also resorting to the deliveringy of online classes but high schools as wellourses.
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    • Due to the Coronavirus pandemic in 2020, the use of technology to keep up with classes and work became more relevant, and that is a leap forward to the advancement of the way we live today.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Due to tThe Ccoronavirus pandemic inof 2020, resulted in the use of several technology to keep up with classes and work became more relevant, and that is a leap forward to the advancement of the way we live todayies to sustain educational and working environments.
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  • câu 8
    • Working and studying remotely has its advantages like no commute, and it can even reduce the carbon footprint, fewer traffic jams, and of course, save money from transportation, not to mention less stress.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Working and studying remotely has its advantages like no commute, and i time. It can even reduce the carbon footprint, fewerlessen traffic jams, and of course, save money fromon transportation, not to mention lessen stress.
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    • In the educational field, in some cases, the schedule is way more flexible, enabling the student to choose when to watch classes.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
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    • I experienced all the benefits from remote work and study and I can guarantee that my development at both places was higher online than doing it personally.
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    • I experienced all the benefits from remote work and study and. I can guarantee that my development at both places was highere greater online than doing itin personally.
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    • Internet is the future, and extraordinary developments and ideas are being created to shape a better future for all of us.
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    • IThe internet is the future, and e. Extraordinary developments and ideas are being created to shape a better future for all of us.
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    • The main purpose is to facilitate access and give possibilities to choose how to manage our precious time.
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