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    • I will start by me a present,my name is Bombardier and that’s my thoughts: 1.in the futher i hope to do a lot of money 2.Maybe I will make it a just open a business 3.I like to sleep 4.When I was a little I liked to play football and to run,and now I sitting in front of laptop and watch how time pass.Time goes hard because I am bored,I want to do something interesting,I don’t know what,but maybe I find something to do.I don’t know what something else to say.Now I started to learn English because I need to know to be able to talk and in that’s language..

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    • I will start by me a present,my name is Bombardier and that’s my thoughts: 1.in the futher i hope to do a lot of money 2.Maybe I will make it a just open a business 3.I like to sleep 4.When I was a little I liked to play football and to run,and now I sitting in front of laptop and watch how time pass.Time goes hard because I am bored,I want to do something interesting,I don’t know what,but maybe I find something to do.I don’t know what something else to say.Now I started to learn English because I need to know to be able to talk and in that’s language..
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