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  • The Summer Carnival in Starogorsk XI

    • Three years ago, in summer camp, there was a game “Take the Fortress,” and we, the little ones, were got into scouts by the older guys.
    • And everything was so good at first, I got to the fortress itself, but then they suddenly grabbed me and pulled me out of the grass.
    • The guys laughed at me, “We saw from afar that you were crawling.
    • Your head shines up in the sun like a new penny!” Since then I became known as ”Penny”.
    • I really have hair with a copper tint, or rather, with a touch of brass, especially when I have a crew cut.
    • But what does nickname Penny have to do with it!
    • Such a stupid nickname, as if I I’m only worth one penny ...
  • To be continued...

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