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  • Ted lives in New York, but he was born in Manchester, England.
  • His house is near a theater where he goes with his friends on weekends.
  • His older brother’s name is Fred.
  • He is married to a girl named Julia, who works as a nurse at a nearby hospital.
  • Fred’s house is small, one-story, and has a garden with some fruit trees.
  • There is also a garage.
  • The garage door is the same color as the house.
    • Fred is going to repaint it to another color this Saturday.
    • He needs some paint for this, and he thinks a small can will be enough.
  • To the left of his house are his neighbors, with whom Fred and Julia have a good friendship.
    • To the right of them is a small cafe where they go during their lunch break to have a snack.
  • Ted and Fred have a cousin on their mother’s side named Emily, who is Canadian.
  • She’s a student at the University of Ottawa.
    • Some of her friends also study the same university.
  • Her father, Mr. James, is our uncle, and he has been working as a manager for Coca-Cola since September 2015.
  • Coca-Cola is a very large company, and they have a branch office in Ottawa, with their main headquarters located in the United States.
  • Mr. James speaks several foreign languages, which helps him a lot in his work.

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