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    • Film about a famous person

    • Many people remain unknown to us nowadays.
    • However, they had a crucial role in the events that changed our lives and how we live today.
    • One example is Stephen Hawking, a physicist in the 20th century that wrote important thesis about outer space and black holes.
    • Hawking won many prizes for his theories and became as much famous as Einstein.
    • Because of his intellect and life experience with a rare disease, a movie has been shoot telling his story.
    • Many critics were skeptical about it, and most of them underrated the story. however, the movie turned out to be a huge success and shocked many viewers with his life story.
    • The production is a biography and was shoot while Stephen was alive.
    • The film shows how he was not an exemplary student at Oxford, but a change of events helped to find his passion, writing theories.
    • During his studies at university, he unearths a disease that causes muscle disorder, and that is when he starts to struggle to keep his work as a physicist.
    • His strength and perseverance taught me how to keep fighting for my dreams and never give up.
  • I certainly would recommend this piece of art, it will definitely change the way you see life.

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