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    • The dead tiger and the animal bones

    • On Thursday, the body of a dead tiger that weighs 34kg together with 34kg of the animal bones were found in a house in Ha Tinh province.
    • The dead tiger and the animal bones were detected inside the freezer of 42 years old, Nguyen Van An who is living in Huong Son district, Ha Tinh.
    • On Thursday, a raid of the Hanoi environment police and the Huongson’s official found out dead animal bodies A said that at the end of the year 2020, he happened to meet a truck container driver at a restaurant in Huongson.
    • When the man visited An’s house, he suggested An keep a freezer containing animals that are used to make bone glue, even give An some money and An agreed with.
    • About 10 days later, the man shipped that freezer to An’s house.
    • An saw there were the body of a dead tiger and animal bones inside.
    • So in the beginning, An refused to get it.
    • The man gave An 9 million, which made An change his decision.
  • Tigers are listed as endangered on the Red List of IUCN.
    • Their numbers are threatened by poaching for illegal wild animals trade, as some people think that their bones could be used to make traditional medicine for treating some diseases.
    • Hunting, killing, possessing, capturing, transporting, or trading protected animals is illegal in Vietnam with the rate of incarceration up to 15 years and fines up to 15 billion.

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    • On Thursday, the body of a dead tiger that weighs 34kg together with 34kg of the animal bones were found in a house in Ha Tinh province.
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    • On Thursday, the body of a dead tiger that weighsing 34 kg together withplus 34 kg of the animal bones were found in a house in Ha Tinh province.
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    • The dead tiger and the animal bones were detected inside the freezer of 42 years old, Nguyen Van An who is living in Huong Son district, Ha Tinh.
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    • The dead tiger and the animal bones were detectefound inside the freezer of 42 years old, Nguyen Van An who is living42 and lives in Huong Son district, Ha Tinh.
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    • On Thursday, a raid of the Hanoi environment police and the Huongson’s official found out dead animal bodies A said that at the end of the year 2020, he happened to meet a truck container driver at a restaurant in Huongson.
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    • On The dead tiger and bones were discovered on Thursday, during a raid of theconducted by Hanoi environmental police and the Huongson’s official found out dead animal bodies¶
      A said that at the end of the year 2020, he happened to me
      . An said that he met a truck container driver at a restaurant in Huongson at the end of 2020.
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    • When the man visited An’s house, he suggested An keep a freezer containing animals that are used to make bone glue, even give An some money and An agreed with.
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    • When the man visited An’s house, he suggested An keep a freezer contasked if An would keep the animal remains ing animals that are used to make bone glue, even give An some money and An agreed with freezer so that they could later make glue. He paid An and so An agreed to keep the animal remains.
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    • Their numbers are threatened by poaching for illegal wild animals trade, as some people think that their bones could be used to make traditional medicine for treating some diseases.
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    • Their numbers are threatened by poaching for illegal wild animals trade,survival in the wild is threatened by illegal poaching as some people think thatuse their bones could be used to make traditional medicine for treating somehe treatment of certain diseases.
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    • Hunting, killing, possessing, capturing, transporting, or trading protected animals is illegal in Vietnam with the rate of incarceration up to 15 years and fines up to 15 billion.
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    • Hunting, killing, possessing, capturcapturing, keeping, transporting, and/or trading protected animals is illegal in Vietnam with the rate of incarcerationand persons found guilty of such face up to 15 years imprisonment and fines up to 15 billion.
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