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Text from gustavo_he4 - English

  • Financial hardship.

  • Describe a time that you had to tighten your belt due to any sort of financial hardship.
    • My childhood was not full of luxuries like many kids have nowadays, for instance, cellphones, tablets and video games.
    • instead, I had quite a few toys to play with, and that, kind of taught me how to manage my finances in some way.
  • Even though I consider myself an extremely organized person, when it comes to money, I had to tighten my belt for a couple of months having wanted to start my degree.
    • That happened because my salary was not enough to pay my bills in arrears, pay for my driver’s license and afford a degree in engineering.
    • I was running up a lot of debts at such a young age, so I had to put paid to this situation and cut down on some expenses.

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    • My childhood was not full of luxuries like many kids have nowadays, for instance, cellphones, tablets and video games.
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    • My childhood was not full of the luxuries like many kids have nowadays, for instance, cell, e.g., mobile phones, tablets and video games, that many kids have today.
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    • Even though I consider myself an extremely organized person, when it comes to money, I had to tighten my belt for a couple of months having wanted to start my degree.
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    • That happened because my salary was not enough to pay my bills in arrears, pay for my driver’s license and afford a degree in engineering.
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    • That happened because my salary was not enough to pay my bills which were in arrears, pay for my driver’s licensce and afford¶
      a degree in engineering.
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    • I was running up a lot of debts at such a young age, so I had to put paid to this situation and cut down on some expenses.
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    • I was running up a lot of debts at such a young age, so I had to put paian end to this situation and cut down on some expenses.
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