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  • My girlfriend

    • Last night, my company had a party at a fancy restaurant which is a stone’s throw away from my company.
    • All staff was desperate for the party because my boss would foot the bill completely.
    • But he had a suggestion for everyone.
    • He made us take wife or husband or lover to the party.
    • I went over this with my girlfriend the other day.
    • I tried to beg her to take part in the party with me.
    • At the end of the day, she agreed with me.
    • Last night, I picked her up at her house.
    • She looks very ravishing on the white skirt.
    • I was really into the way she wears make up when going out.
    • When we just appeared in front of the restaurant, there were a lot of guys staring at her.
    • I did not really like this so I quickly took her to the seat.
    • The party was an all-you-can-eat, very amazing.
    • There were not only eye catching but also mouth watering cuisine.
    • I guess everything there costs an arm and a leg.
    • My boss came to my table and invited her to dance.
    • Actually, I knew that she always has two left feet so I looked for an excuse to refuse him.
  • I wondered if he would take this to heart.
    • During the party, she did not one word.
  • She gave me a cold shoulder.
    • It looked as though like a passive aggressive.
    • I was sure she was still mad with me about giving a strange girl a ride to a hotel last week.
    • Some co-workers realized this and started gathering in a corner and talked about it.
    • I was so angry with these guys but I had to bite my lip and tried to roll off my back.
    • On the way back home from the party.
    • I yelled at her about how she behaved at the party.
    • She did not still say one word that just cried.
  • It made me feel a little guilty.

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