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Text från julian_and - English

  • My girlfrield’s birthday

  • Last Sunday was My girlfriend’s birthday.
  • She turnd fifteen years old, it was a special birthday as girls at that age became women, So I bought I fine present for her; It was a beautiful and big teddy bear, I bought it as she likes teddy bears a lot.
  • I also bought her a black shirt, she was very exited when she saw the teddy bear! she loved it, I could she her big smile on her face. after have giving her the present I ivited her to celebrate that special date, so we went to dace and drink some drinks.
  • We enjoy a lot, so much that we didn’t realize about the time it was, it was too late and her mother was angry because she had told us to come back at 12 pm

VÄNLIGEN, HJÄLP TILL ATT RÄTTA VARJE MENING! - English

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    • She turnd fifteen years old, it was a special birthday as girls at that age became women, So I bought I fine present for her; It was a beautiful and big teddy bear, I bought it as she likes teddy bears a lot.
      Rösta nu!
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    • I also bought her a black shirt, she was very exited when she saw the teddy bear! she loved it, I could she her big smile on her face. after have giving her the present I ivited her to celebrate that special date, so we went to dace and drink some drinks.
      Rösta nu!
    • LÄGG TILL en NY KORRIGERING - Mening 3LÄGG TILL en NY KORRIGERING - Mening 3
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    • We enjoy a lot, so much that we didn’t realize about the time it was, it was too late and her mother was angry because she had told us to come back at 12 pm
      Rösta nu!
    • LÄGG TILL en NY KORRIGERING - Mening 4LÄGG TILL en NY KORRIGERING - Mening 4