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  • My girlfrield’s birthday

  • Last Sunday was My girlfriend’s birthday.
  • She turnd fifteen years old, it was a special birthday as girls at that age became women, So I bought I fine present for her; It was a beautiful and big teddy bear, I bought it as she likes teddy bears a lot.
  • I also bought her a black shirt, she was very exited when she saw the teddy bear! she loved it, I could she her big smile on her face. after have giving her the present I ivited her to celebrate that special date, so we went to dace and drink some drinks.
  • We enjoy a lot, so much that we didn’t realize about the time it was, it was too late and her mother was angry because she had told us to come back at 12 pm

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  • Sentence 2
    • She turnd fifteen years old, it was a special birthday as girls at that age became women, So I bought I fine present for her; It was a beautiful and big teddy bear, I bought it as she likes teddy bears a lot.
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  • Sentence 3
    • I also bought her a black shirt, she was very exited when she saw the teddy bear! she loved it, I could she her big smile on her face. after have giving her the present I ivited her to celebrate that special date, so we went to dace and drink some drinks.
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  • Sentence 4
    • We enjoy a lot, so much that we didn’t realize about the time it was, it was too late and her mother was angry because she had told us to come back at 12 pm
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