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    • My girlfrield’s birthday

    • Last Sunday was My girlfriend’s birthday.
    • She turnd fifteen years old, it was a special birthday as girls at that age became women, So I bought I fine present for her; It was a beautiful and big teddy bear, I bought it as she likes teddy bears a lot.
    • I also bought her a black shirt, she was very exited when she saw the teddy bear! she loved it, I could she her big smile on her face. after have giving her the present I ivited her to celebrate that special date, so we went to dace and drink some drinks.
    • We enjoy a lot, so much that we didn’t realize about the time it was, it was too late and her mother was angry because she had told us to come back at 12 pm

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    • She turnd fifteen years old, it was a special birthday as girls at that age became women, So I bought I fine present for her; It was a beautiful and big teddy bear, I bought it as she likes teddy bears a lot.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • She turned fifteen years old,; it was a special birthday as girls at that age became women,. So I bought Ia fine present for her;. It was a beautiful and big teddy bear,. I bought it as she likes teddy bears a lot.
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    • I also bought her a black shirt, she was very exited when she saw the teddy bear! she loved it, I could she her big smile on her face. after have giving her the present I ivited her to celebrate that special date, so we went to dace and drink some drinks.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I also bought her a black shirt, and she was very excited when she saw the teddy bear! sShe loved it,; I could shsee her big smile on her face. aAfter have giving her the present, I invited her to celebrate that special date, so we went to dace and driank some drinks.
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    • We enjoy a lot, so much that we didn’t realize about the time it was, it was too late and her mother was angry because she had told us to come back at 12 pm
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • We enjoyed it a lot, so much that we didn’t realize about the time it was,; it was too late, and her mother was angry because she had told us to come back at 12 pm.m.
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