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• I believe that I can be an entrepreneur, but not sure if I can be a successful one.

• I think that the most important quality that an entrepreneur should have is not to be afraid to take risks.

• An entrepreneur does not give up when everything goes not the way he or she planned.

• An entrepreneur just analyzes the current situation impartially to make decisions in order to change everything for the better.

• It’s been about a year since I got a full-time job with a stable income.

• I must admit that I became a hostage to this predictability, and the longer I work there, the more difficult it is for me to imagine that I can now go to nowhere and start my own business.

• I used to work for myself and my income depended solely on my efforts.

• But at this stage of my life, since I have some obligations and dependents, it is difficult for me to imagine myself as a full-fledged entrepreneur.

• I understand that I will be careful and will not be able to put up with large financial injections or losses, and even more so to take serious risks.

• Furthermore, until the world economy, and especially the economy in Russia, and my financial situation stabilizes, I will not dare to devote myself entirely to business and quit my job At the same time, I understand that I have several ideas that I could implement with a high probability of success now if I had more time and less cares about probable failures.

• I think I could succeed in that business because I have sufficient qualifications for this, I understand the market, plus I have made calculations and decided that this would be a profitable venture