Corrections

Text from lilyabreak - English

  • Travel anecdote

    • The most unusual thing that happened during my trip, was a delay.
    • What is so unusual you ask?
    • But what would you say if I say that this delay was for a week?
    • In the day of set off I looked at the window and saw that there was a strong wind and snow outside.
    • It was a typical winter in Chukotka (this is the very north of Russia) where is cold all year round and I didn’t pay attention to it.
    • But when I reached the airport a real blizzard started.
    • Obviously, all flights had to be delayed.
    • Moreover, it was impossible to return home in such awful weather.
    • However, airline was ready for such a turn: because there were only dozens of passenger they decided to give everyone room at the hotel!
    • They also had a supermarket and gave everyone special ticket that allowed taking everything you need.
    • So, nobody was upset about the delay: we watched TV, played board game, and enjoyed free food.
  • The week passed very quickly and in the end many people didn’t want to leave!
    • This delay turned out to be a little vacation.
    • But instead of all-inclusive we had a free supermarket and instead of sunny beaches outside was a blizzard.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English