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  • Yesterday

    • Yesterday, i went to work to eat, because i don’t have much money to eat, later i went home by metro, but when I got off the metro!!
    • Had a controller, the problem is i didn’t have my ticket 🎟️ so I tried to negotiate, because the fine was too expensive, i said - sir you can give me this fine, but i have no money to pay there.
    • Today i was go in my school to try my Brussels card and they said i have to wait

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  • Sentence 1
    • Yesterday, i went to work to eat, because i don’t have much money to eat, later i went home by metro, but when I got off the metro!!
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    • Yesterday, iI went to work to eat, but because iI don’idn't have much money to eat, I later i went home by metro, but when I gohad a problem when trying to get off the metro!!
    • Yesterday, i went to work to eat, because i don’t have much money to eat, l. Later iI went home by metro, b. But when I got off the metro!!
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  • Sentence 2
    • Had a controller, the problem is i didn’t have my ticket 🎟️ so I tried to negotiate, because the fine was too expensive, i said - sir you can give me this fine, but i have no money to pay there.
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    • Had a controller, tthere was a ticket inspector. The problem is iwas that I didn’t have my ticket 🎟️ so I tried to negotiate, because the fine was too expensive, imuch for me to pay. I said - s”Sir, you can givfine me this fine, but iI have no money to pay there.
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