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Text from JCR - English

    • Kissing is a human wonder

    • I consider simple things make bigger effects than some unecessary complicated things.
    • For instance, a kiss is something simple and natural; nevertheless it gives us several benefits that can help us to make up to kiss more, since it is one of the healthiest things you can do, because kissing release tension, anxiety; in other words after a kiss you will not not feel stressed.
    • In addition, it strengthens your immune system, and helps relieving period cramps.
    • Then you can say goodbye to allergies.
    • That’s why, I think kissing is a simple thing can produce big effects.
    • A kiss is another way of expressin yourself with no words; a kiss can start a relationship or reuin it.
  • In short, kiss more and live better.
    • PD: Thanks a lot for correcting me!!!

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