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  • Have you just won the lottery?

  • It is very difficult to win the lottery.
  • And even if you win your life can go extremely badly and you can run out of money surprisingly quickly.
    • But how can you avoid these negative effects?
    • First of all you should plan ahead what do you want to buy.
    • Write a list of things you want to buy and don’t let shopaholism cloud your mind.
    • Secondly, don’t quit your job!
  • You could get very bored without it.
    • If you win a life-changing amount of money I would recommend you to start your own business.
    • At least you would be working for yourself this time.
    • Finally, if you win the lottery it’s the best to put your money in a saving account and take only a part of it.
    • So even if you can’t control yourself, the bank will control you.

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