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  • My favorite song

    • I don’t have one favorite song, I think there are several.
    • But first one that come to my mind is “Big Iron” by Martin Robbins.
    • First of all, it is a country ballad and has not just good lyric, but told us a whole story!
    • It is about an Arizona ranger’s duel with 24-old year outlaw.
    • It describe the Western life of people that days so bright, like it’s a movie!
    • I’m a fan of westerns, I like cowboys and all that Western theme and this song includes these all.
    • Secondly, it has good tune and rhythm and often make me sing along with it, although I haven’t learned it by heart yet.
    • Finally, there are many good songs nowadays, but it’s very rare when song includes all that aspects, that has “Big Iron”: good tune, energetic rhythm and perfect lyric.

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    • It describe the Western life of people that days so bright, like it’s a movie!
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    • It describes the Western life of people thatpeople's lives, whose days soare bright, like it’s a movie!
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    • It describe the Western life of people that days so bright, like it’s a movie!

      NOTE: Not really sure of the intention of this statement.¶

      Maybe this: It describes life in the (old) West so well that it's like watching a (Western) movie.
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    • It describes the Western life of people that days so bright,in the Wild West of the US during those days so vividly - like it’s a movie!
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    • I’m a fan of westerns, I like cowboys and all that Western theme and this song includes these all.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I’m a fan of westerns, I like cowboys and all that Western theme and this song includes these allatic about the Western theme: the cowboys, the Western scenary, the life style, the music, the clothing, and etc, and this song brings up all of these features.
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    • I’m a fan of westerns, I like cowboys and all that Western themes, and this song includes thfeaturese all of that.
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    • I’m a fan of wWesterns,. I like cowboys and all thatnything in general with Western themes and this song includes all of these all.
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    • Secondly, it has good tune and rhythm and often make me sing along with it, although I haven’t learned it by heart yet.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Secondly, ithe song has good tunebeats and rhythm and often. It makes me sing along with it, aleven though I haven’t learned itdo not know its lyrics by heart yet.
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    • Secondly, it has good tune and rhythm and often makes me want to sing along with it, although I haven’t yet learned it by heart yet.
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    • Secondly, it has good tune and rhythm and. It often makes me sing along with it, although I haven’t learned it by heart yet.
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    • Finally, there are many good songs nowadays, but it’s very rare when song includes all that aspects, that has “Big Iron”: good tune, energetic rhythm and perfect lyric.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Finally, there are many good songs nowadays, but it’s very rare when song includes all that aspects, that h. However, finding a song as “"Big Iron”: good tune," is really rare. The good beating, the energetic rhythm and the perfect lyrics make “Big Iron” an unique song for me.
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    • Finally, while there are many good songs nowathese days, buit it’s very rare when song includes all that aspects, that has “Big Iron”: good tune, energetic rhythm and perfect lyrics rare that contemporary sings have the excellent melody, energetic rhythm and lyrical quality of "Big Iron". ¶
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    • Finally, although there are many good songs nowadays, but it’s very rare when a song includes all thate aspects, that has “Big Iron”: has: a good tune, energetic rhythm and perfect lyrics. ¶
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