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Text from TIMDN - English

  • WHAT I DID LAST NIGHT

    • Last night, I still continued to go to the same place which is a stone’s throw away from my house to see that handsome busker was performing.
    • I really was drawn to his face and voice.
    • That’s one of the coolest voices I’ve ever heard.
    • Honestly, I’m a cheapskate, but this time I decided to put some bucks into his hat and asked him for a date.
    • Right after getting my offer, he become awkward and then gave me the cold shoulder.
    • He drove me crazy and I yelled at him and took my money back in the shocking presence of people around there.
    • Coming back home, I was going to hit the hay but I could not, even a kip.
    • I always thought of him and now I feel a little guilty about what I did.

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