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    • DIVORCES

    • The increase of divorce rate has been sustaining with the increase of the outbreak worldwide.
    • People get bored each other after a while because those with live with each other all the time interfere their everything, which leads to the process of reckless marriage.If proper solutions are known and applied well, overcoming the problem will become easier but this problem is becoming a widespread issue in the world.
    • As regards the causes of this, someone getting married love an other woman and they have faced economic issues since they get married.
    • First of all, one of the most obvious causes is that those with get married get bored each other after a while.The more time you spend with each other, the more bored you get.
    • With the increase of the pandemic, people have began to run out their spouses.
    • The findings of rigorous research suggests that people with get married never spend more time with each other because the more you are experienced by love, the less happy you will be.
    • Besides getting bored, other essential causes of this is that if a married person loves other people, his/her spouse decide to divorce with his/her.
    • How can they do that to their spouses although they are married?
  • It is a hard to understand why these people choose other women although they are married, which is caused by ignorant society.
    • All their spouses want is to be happy family but they are broken up their families.
    • Taking everything into account, divorces has been increasing day by day due to the pandemic.
    • The main causes of this is that some people with decide to get married get bored with their spouses after they get married.
    • In addition, economic issues and loving other people through affairs are other causes of divorce.

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    • People get bored each other after a while because those with live with each other all the time interfere their everything, which leads to the process of reckless marriage.If proper solutions are known and applied well, overcoming the problem will become easier but this problem is becoming a widespread issue in the world.
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      with       each other after a while because those with live with each other all the time, especially if a partner starts to interfere witheir everything, which leads to the process of reckless marriage.the marriage suffers. If proper solutions are knownfound and applied well, overcoming the problem will become easier but this problem is becoming a widespread issue in the world.
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    • As regards the causes of this, someone getting married love an other woman and they have faced economic issues since they get married.
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    • As regards Other causes of this, someone getting married love an other woman and they have faced economic issues since they getcould be, a husband loving some other woman while the couple has financial issues early in their marriedaige.
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    • First of all, one of the most obvious causes is that those with get married get bored each other after a while.The more time you spend with each other, the more bored you get.
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    • First of all, one of the most obvious causes is that those with get married get bored each other after a while.The more time you spend with each other, the more bored you get.
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    • The findings of rigorous research suggests that people with get married never spend more time with each other because the more you are experienced by love, the less happy you will be.
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    • The findings of rigorous research suggests that people with get married never spend more time with each other because the more you are experienced by love, the less happy you will be.?
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    • Besides getting bored, other essential causes of this is that if a married person loves other people, his/her spouse decide to divorce with his/her.
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    • Besides getting bored, other essential causes of this is that if a married person loves other people, his/her spouse decide to divorce with his/her.
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    • It is a hard to understand why these people choose other women although they are married, which is caused by ignorant society.
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    • Taking everything into account, divorces has been increasing day by day due to the pandemic.
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    • Taking everything into account, divorces has been increasing day by day due to the pandemicIn summary, covid-19 has affected divorce rates in a clear way.
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