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Culture shock is defined as going to a country other than the one you live in.

Actually, it doesn’t necessary to go to another country.

It is enough to change the place you are used to.

People with go to another country at their first time are likely to face cultural shock, which is absolutely normal.

People should definitely see culture and tradition of other countries which are extraordinary in terms of culture.

First of all, cultural shock is becoming a widespread issue in the world.

Some people claim that their country is the most beautiful in terms of culture and tradition and thus they don’t need to see culture of other countries, which brings about a ignorant society.

Culture shock affects some people who aren’t used to another place or country deeply, meaning they broaden their cultural diversity which is the one of most crucial features for some people.

In addition, culture shock broadens our perception from every way.

People with undergo cultural shock suggest that you must see culture of other countries who is developed countries because it will improve you in every way.

In the contrary, some people support that culture shock is harmful to you because if you had experienced culture of other countries, you would not have stayed their country, which creates massive immigration as well.

All they wanted to do would be to go to other countries.

Taking everything into account, culture shock has great advantages as well as some disadvantages.

Some people consider culture shock is harmful to humanity while others are sure that it broadens our perception in every way.

If I had a chance to go to other countries for culture, I would be better than I am.