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  • Social media

    • Youth population have been killed with the invention of the social media for decades.
  • The more youngsters utilize social media, the more risks they take.
    • Parents have been concerning all the time about this topic.
    • There remains some disagreement as to whether these topic favorable.
    • Social media has great advantages and some disadvantages but it began to be used for evil things.
  • If the proper solutions are known and applied well, overcoming the problem will become easier.
  • First of all, one of the most obvious solutions is that youngsters should be careful who they talk to.
    • Youth should decide whether strangers is good or not after they spend a little time with strangers.
    • You should not absolutely send their private photos to strangers, which can lead to domestic violence after a while because if strangers send their photos to their parents, parents will be angry this situation.
    • In addition, parents should watch out to their children’s use of social media.
  • The other essential solution is that states should take precautions on social media for youngsters.
  • For instance, states should restrict some social media apps such as TikTok.
    • People who utilize these unnecessary apps affect both psychological and physical.
    • Even such apps are restricted, states should clean harmful users.
    • Besides the precautions, youngsters should get educated properly.
    • The findings of rigorous research suggests that social media users who use in developed countries are less at risk than underdeveloped countries because they know how to use social media.
    • To summarize, social media has much more drawbacks.
    • If we continue to use in a wrong way instead of solving the problem, it will do more harm our children.
    • The necessary solutions are that youngsters should be careful what they talk to and states should take some precautions on social media, thereby decreasing the youth mortality rate.

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