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  • LIVING ALONE

  • People with alone has been increasing with the increase of the outbreak for two years.
  • As long as people have to stay at home with their spouse due to the pandemic, they don’t love with their spouse anymore because they debate each other all the time, which leads to reckless families.
  • Therefore, most people begin to consider loneliness is far better than marriage.
  • Yet, loneliness have great advantages as well as some disadvantages.
  • The main advantage is that you can do whatever you want while its disadvantage brings about some mental diseases such as depression.
  • First of all, one of the most obvious advantage of loneliness is that it provides a sense of freedom.
  • Most people can’t feel free themselves due to marriage because they can’t be allowed whatever you want.
  • Thus, people with get married suggest that if you want to enjoy life, you should definitely not get married.
  • For instance, researchers conducted that people who live alone is happier than married because they can feel a sense of freedom rather than restriction.
  • On the other hand, living alone causes some mental problems such as depression.
  • They will be jealous of married ones after a while and if these people would like to have a baby as well, it will lead to mental problems such as depression.
  • They can’t enjoy life because of depression and live a boring life.
  • Therefore, all they will want is to get married with someone who makes them happy, which is one of the most marvelous things their life.
  • To sum up, loneliness have some pros and cons.
  • As regards the advantage of this, you can do whatever you want and thus it provides a sense of freedom while the disadvantage is that it brings about some mental issues such as depression because they envy other people

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    • The main advantage is that you can do whatever you want while its disadvantage brings about some mental diseases such as depression.
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    • For instance, researchers conducted that people who live alone is happier than married because they can feel a sense of freedom rather than restriction.
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    • They will be jealous of married ones after a while and if these people would like to have a baby as well, it will lead to mental problems such as depression.
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    • Therefore, all they will want is to get married with someone who makes them happy, which is one of the most marvelous things their life.
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    • As regards the advantage of this, you can do whatever you want and thus it provides a sense of freedom while the disadvantage is that it brings about some mental issues such as depression because they envy other people
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