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    • Studying abroad

    • Turkey’s youth population has started to immigrate to developed countries such as U.S, U.K because they know these countries’ education quality are better than Turkey.
  • Families with children who want to go abroad don’t want to immigrate their children to developed countries as they miss their children.
    • Studying abroad has some advantages and disadvantages.
    • The main disadvantages of studying abroad are missing family and adaptation process while the advantages are learning a foreign language and the quality of education is better.
  • First of all, one of the main advantages of studying abroad is learning a foreign language.
  • So far, most students has dreamed to live at developed countries because of economic issues, which creates to immigrate to other countries.
    • In addition, they would like to learn a foreign language and as you know, it is easy to learn a foreign language at other countries.
    • For instance, students who want to learn english should go to U.K or U.S.
    • The other advantage of studying abroad is that developed countries provide better quality education than Turkey because they provide students whatever they want.
    • On the other hand, studying abroad has some disadvantages, too.
  • The biggest disadvantage is that students miss their families.
  • Students who reside in other countries always say that Turkey is more beautiful than all countries because they are homesick.
  • In addition, students who go to other countries will have to face adaptation process.
  • To exemplify, they will be homesick because they don’t know their traditions or life styles.
  • They gradually learn these things after a while but until that time they continue to suffer.
  • By way of conclusion, studying abroad has some pros and cons.
  • The advantages of studying abroad are learning a foreign language and education quality while the disadvantages are missing family and adaptation process to other countries.
  • I think every student should go to at least developed countries and if they can graduate at developed countries, they should definitely appreciate this opportunity.

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    • Turkey’s youth population has started to immigrate to developed countries such as U.S, U.K because they know these countries’ education quality are better than Turkey.
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    •  Turkey’s youth populations hasve started to immigrateing to such developed countries such as ¶
      U.S,      as the U.S and U.K because they know these countries’ education quality are quality of education in these countries is better than in Turkey.
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    • Families with children who want to go abroad don’t want to immigrate their children to developed countries as they miss their children.
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    • The main disadvantages of studying abroad are missing family and adaptation process while the advantages are learning a foreign language and the quality of education is better.
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    • The main disadvantages of studying abroad are missing one's family and
      the process of adaptation process, while the main advantages are learning a foreign language and taccess to higher quality of ¶
      education is better.
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    • So far, most students has dreamed to live at developed countries because of economic issues, which creates to immigrate to other countries.
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    • In addition, they would like to learn a foreign language and as you know, it is easy to learn a foreign language at other countries.
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    • In addition, they would like
       to learn a foreign language and as you know, it is easyier to learn a foreign language at othein the country (or
      countries) where it is spoken.
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    • The other advantage of studying abroad is that developed countries provide better quality education than Turkey because they provide students whatever they want.
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      other advantage of studying abroad is that developed countries provide betta higher quality
      of education than Turkey because they provideoffer students whatever they wantmore options.
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    • Students who reside in other countries always say that Turkey is more beautiful than all countries because they are homesick.
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    • The advantages of studying abroad are learning a foreign language and education quality while the disadvantages are missing family and adaptation process to other countries.
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    • I think every student should go to at least developed countries and if they can graduate at developed countries, they should definitely appreciate this opportunity.
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