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Text from mahmut_mer - English

    • USING DRUGS

    • People have started to use harmful drugs so far because they found them easier than in the past because with the development of medical world, even normal people can produce drugs.
    • People who use these drugs cannot get rid of this awful position which leads to addiction.
    • Using drugs has negative effects in various aspects.
    • For instance, these people will undergo in the future because of drugs such as aggressiveness and paranoia and therefore, using drugs leads to domestic violence.
    • First of all, the main negative effects of using drugs is that it leads to addiction.
    • If people use drugs at least once, they gradually become addicted to them.
    • Thus, if someone, especially your friends, tries to get you to use drugs, you just get away from that place.
    • In addition, people who are addicted establish behavioral problems such as aggressiveness and paranoia.
    • In addition to leading to addiction, using drugs leads to domestic violence.
    • When people come home after using drugs, these people can beat their families, which creates a restless society.
    • The findings of rigorous research suggests that people who use drugs are more violent than other people.
    • Therefore, the families of these people are prevented properly by state.
    • States should punish people who use drugs and beat their families.
    • To sum up, using drugs has negative effects such as addiction, behavioral problems and domestic violence.
    • People who use drugs should seek immediate medical aid.
    • Otherwise, the families of these people maintain to be beaten.
    • I think state should pay more attention to people who use drugs.

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