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  • Butterflies

  • I grow some green and flowers at my home.
    • One part of it grows in a grow box and the other on my balcony.
    • A grow box is closed space, where its own microclimate created by light and ventilation system.
    • In turns on and off by timer, so I don’t strain too much.
    • In the grow box plants are quite happy, they are strong and grows fast.
    • But I didn’t stop on this closed and secure system.
    • On my balcony also equipped growing area.
  • But this area has many difficulties.
    • The temperature isn’t stable - too hot in summer and too cold in winter, there is not enough light because it’s in the corner, furthermore pests attack my plants.
    • And the main pest is butterflies, more precisely her previous state - caterpillars.
    • They guzzle all indiscriminately - basil, parsley, mint, salad, even begonia was a victim.
    • While I was read about them, I saw an interesting idea: put caterpillars into transparent container and once you will get the whole jar with butterflies.
    • It must be interesting experience and how fun then to open the jar giving them freedom.
    • Although I almost sure that mine caterpillars is usual cabbage butterfly, quite dull compared same papilio machaon..

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