Corrections

Text from Aysanshi4 - English

  • Making friends🥰

    • Hello everyone .
    • Let’s get to the point .
    • In this short text I want to write about making new friends .
    • In my mind with devolep the technologys people can to making friend through social app and net but I believe makeing friend is first step abd and there are many important other things to enter a relationship , but I love have friends around the world.
    • Thanks anyone who corrects my text.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English