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    • Hi every one,welcome to my topic 💫 I’m Aysan from Iran and I’m 23 ,of course some months later I’m knocking on 24 .
    • 🤩I’m so active and hard work and I try don’t waste of my times.🌟 I have a lot of activity in my free time 😁and I usually try enjoy my life even in the worst situations🙃 at first it’s hard but possible👸 I more explain about my activity in next topic🌺 Thanks people that will correct my text🌺🌺

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  • câu 1
    • Hi every one,welcome to my topic 💫 I’m Aysan from Iran and I’m 23 ,of course some months later I’m knocking on 24 .
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Hi every one,welcome to my topic 💫¶
      I’m Aysan from Iran and I’m 23       ,of course s. Some months later I’mll be knocking on 24 .
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    • 🤩I’m so active and hard work and I try don’t waste of my times.🌟 I have a lot of activity in my free time 😁and I usually try enjoy my life even in the worst situations🙃 at first it’s hard but possible👸 I more explain about my activity in next topic🌺 Thanks people that will correct my text🌺🌺
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • 🤩I’m sovery active and hard work anding. I try don’tnot to waste of my times.🌟 ¶
      I       have a lot of'm really activity in my free time 😁and I usually try to enjoy my life even in the worst situations🙃 at first it’s hard but possible👸¶
      I       more explain more about my activityies in next topic🌺¶

      Thanks       people that willto anyone who corrects my text🌺🌺
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